來源:學(xué)而思教育 作者:劉曉偉老師 2009-10-14 18:33:42
今年的寫作題考的是家務(wù)勞動(dòng),屬于傳統(tǒng)話題,目的是保證讓大家有話可說。所以寫作的重點(diǎn)不在于觀點(diǎn)的新穎,而在于語言的優(yōu)美。在中考點(diǎn)睛班中提供的十大閃光句型,可以說為無數(shù)學(xué)生獲得寫作高分起到了畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。
中考點(diǎn)睛班講義:
1. 第一段的寫法:
It is generally believed that ______________________________________________________.
As is known to all, _____________________________________________________________.
If my memory serves me well, ____________________________________________________.
2. 第二段的寫法:
There is no denying that _________________________________________________________. However, great importance should be attached to ___________________________________.
… have the following advantages. Above all / First of all, __________________________. Another advantage is that _______________________________________________________.
In addition/Furthermore/ Last but not the least, _____________________________________
第三段的寫法:
Not only should we ____________________________, but also we should ______________________.
It is not until + 時(shí)間狀語 + that we should ____________________________________.
It is ______________that we should pay more attention to so that we will advance together with a new spirit.
中考作文范例:
If my memory serves me well, housework is one of the most common things in our daily life. Everyone is supposed to take part in it and learn important lessons from it.
There is no denying that parents are responsible for most of the housework in the family. However, I , as a member of it, should do something within my ablility to reduce the burden of them. On almost every late afternoon, my father often mops the floor and cleans the bathroom while my mother cooks the dinner. It is not until after dinner that I join them to clean the table and wash the dishes. Knowing that they shoulder the responsibility of the whole family, I decide to do some more housework in summer holiday.
Not only should we enjoy the comfortable life, but also should we share the burden of those who create it for us. And such is human nature that we should care about our parents. (161words)
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