(浙江金華 作文)Tom去年來到大明所在的學校學習。在學習期間，他對學校提倡的"創建和諧校園"活動感觸頗深。他發現該校的學生學習主動，興 趣廣泛，友愛互助，師生之間關系融洽，人與環境和諧相處(如：保持環境衛生，愛護花草樹木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物等)。(15 分)

①請你以Tom 的名義，給遠在美國的父母寫一封信，介紹學校的現狀并談談你的感受。

②文中不得出現真實的姓名，校名或地名。詞數80左右。信的開頭與結尾已給出，不記入總詞數。

③以下詞匯僅供參考：build up建立，創建 a harmonious campus和諧校園 impress vt. 給……留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school__________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Tom

滿分作文：

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.

The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.

In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.

Yours,

Tom

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