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　　DearLi Hua,

　　I'm glad that you told meyour worry before graduation. It's normal that most people are under pressurefrom life, work and study nowadays. It's important for us to manage our emotions.Good emotions play an active part in our thoughts, decisions and activities.Here is my advice for managing emotions.

　　Firstly, learn to relax.For example, you can do sports after school and have outdoor activities atweekends. Secondly, learn to communicate. You'd better chat with your familyafter dinner, and communicate with your classmates and teachers during thebreak. Thirdly, you should keep healthy, so it's necessary for you to keepdoing exercise.

　　In addition, keeping abalanced diet and a good mood can also help you.

　　I hope my advice can helpyou manage your emotions. And I'm looking forward to your reply soon.

　　Yours,

　　Xiao Min

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