【參考范文】

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　I feel very worried when I hear that you areaddicted to computer games. They will be harmful to you in many ways.

　　To begin with, they will waste too much valuabletime which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. Inaddition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especiallyto your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will beharmful to your mental health. Therefore I strongly hope that you can stay awayfrom them earlier. In order to live a meaningful life, you can read more goodbooks, take more exercise to build up or participate in some social activitiesto expand your horizons.

　　Look forward to your good news.

　　Yours,

　　Lily

　　【解析】

　　1.題干解讀：本文要求根據要點寫一遍短文。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求；再根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡平穩、自然流暢。

　　2.例文點評：本文時態主要為一般將來時。文章緊扣題目要點，內容完整，表述準確，語言的表述符合語法的結構，造句符合英語的表達習慣。

　　3.高分亮點：

　　短語：to begin with，do harm to，be full of，live a meaningful life

　　句型：when引導時間狀語從句：I feel very worried when I hear that you areaddicted to computer games.

　　that引導賓語從句：I strongly hope that you can stay away from them earlier.


 

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