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　　Howto help Wang Tao

　　Wang Taospent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a goodfriend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s veryimportant for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time onhis study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playingcomputer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So hemust give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he willbecome more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him toconcentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him withall his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find muchfun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachersto help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

　　【解析】

　　這是一篇給材料作文。王濤沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學習。作為他的好朋友，要求寫一篇短文來說明你你打算怎么幫他。本文時態主要用一般現在時和一般將來時，人稱主要是第一人稱輔以第三人稱。寫作時注意上下文要聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。為了使行文流暢、上下文銜接自然，寫作時要靈活運用連接詞或過渡語言，使文章有一定的連貫性。要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后必須認真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

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