假如你是Kate，今天發(fā)生了一些不開心的事，請你根據(jù)提示以“An unlucky day”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要點(diǎn)：1.因為鬧鐘沒有響，早上起床晚了;

2.沒趕上校車，不得不步行去上學(xué);

3.到校后，老師讓交家庭作業(yè)時，才發(fā)現(xiàn)作業(yè)落在了家里;

4.文章結(jié)尾進(jìn)行總結(jié)：糟糕的一天。

An unlucky day

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An unlucky day

I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7：10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school. Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9：10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!

【解析】

【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求以Kate的身份，用第一人稱的方式講述不開心的一天;講述過去的事情，用一般過去時;書寫時要注意用全所給材料，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。

2.例文點(diǎn)評：本例文按時間順序got up late this morning…7：10….By the time I got there，…when I got to school…When the teacher asked for my homework講述今天發(fā)生過不愉快的事情，文字表達(dá)清楚，內(nèi)容完整連貫。

3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：get up late;wash my face quickly ;run to the bus stop without breakfast;be late for class.;ask for;leave it at home

句型：原因狀語從句I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off.;

時間狀語從句By the time I got there, the school bus had already gone;

賓語從句When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home;

感嘆句What a bad day it was!

【點(diǎn)睛】本篇是材料作文，書寫前要認(rèn)真他閱讀題干，了解題干的要求，敘述發(fā)生過的事情用一般過去式時;書寫時要圍繞題干提示的要點(diǎn)，按時間順序、有條理地講述自己不幸的一天。

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